Let’s drift from here,
To find where we stand,
to bring what I was born with,
Carried but buried within,
Unearth the life, raise,
smokes of Humanity,
pieces of my beauty,
sunrays piercing clouds,
Two valiant souls,
Even if die,
Of love, we hug each other,
Putting dagger and,
Making free and wild,
Closing with last breath.
#NaBloPoMo Nov:13
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wonderful magic created with words Masoom
Thanks Mahek, I appreciate your reading this post.
Omg, that touched me. Really beautiful poem.
Aww, thanks a lot, pls check out my poems so that you can get the flavor of my writing. Just Saying. Have a great day. π
Masoom I honestly read this 3 times before I commented..Thoughts are beautiful but are you sad ?
Yes it has a hidden grief, π I am glad that you could feel it. Thanks for reading this post.
Yes, Amrita.
You make pain sound beautiful, Masoom.
These lines are beautiful;
Letβs drift from here,
To find where we stand,
Thanks for reading, its the pain which makes life more apt. π
Poignant! I love how you write poems with different moods. This is sad and gloomy. And I like sad and gloomy poems π
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I write variety of poems in which sadness and grief what we call it as. Dark emotions I try to write more often because no one wants to convey it by words, we as humans are so trained to be positive so we try to avoid. I hope you get a flavour of what reality can be. Thanks for reading.
Reblogged this on KCJones.
Thanks for reblogging. π
Thank you for writing a great blog
My Pleasure Ma’am !
Beautiful words with sadness
Absolutely Humaira, I wish to write more. Thanks for reading my post.
My pleasure